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Had no idea, Sharon, what you two went through economically, stress, etc. and yet, God was guiding you. At least you kept your farm land. Thanks for sharing.

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Thanks Pat! Everybody has trials.

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Sharon: Reading both chapters in order, for me, the story flows beautifully. I sometimes struggle with chapter breaks, as to whether a series of paragraphs needs to be split into separate chapters or not. Generally, like you, if the paragraphs talk about different aspects of my.story, they get divided into chapters. Sometimes it goes the other way, where I eliminate chapter breaks where the story line is continuous across their paragraph boundaries.

Final impression? WELL DONE!

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